10 Stern discipline awaits anyone who leaves the path;

the one who hates correction will die.

10 There is severe discipline for him who forsakes the way;

whoever hates reproof will die.

10 Correction is grievous unto him that forsaketh the way:

And he that hateth reproof shall die.

10 Whoever abandons the right path will be severely disciplined;

whoever hates correction will die.

10 The person who quits doing what is right will be punished,

and the one who hates to be corrected will die.

10 There is grievous correction for him that forsaketh the way;

And he that hateth reproof shall die.

10 Grievous correction is for him that forsaketh the path; he that hateth reproof shall die.

10 Discipline is a terrible ⸤burden⸥ to anyone who leaves the ⸤right⸥ path. 

Anyone who hates a warning will die. 

10 Discipline is harsh for the one who leaves the path;

the one who hates correction will die.

10 There is severe discipline for one who forsakes the way,

but one who hates a rebuke will die.

10 Severe discipline belongs to him who forsakes the way;

he who hates a rebuke will die.

10 Hard training is in store for anyone who leaves the right path.

A person who hates to be corrected will die.

10 Grievous punishment is for him who forsakes the way;

He who hates reproof will die.